Nelson Mleczko
Monday, August 15, 2011
Can anyone think of a good way to end this poem ?
I actually really like it. Great use of repetition. I would replace the line about the clown though because it really doesn't fit and the rhythm is off. As for the ending it, maybe say happy birthday and rhyme something with their name.
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